Victor Lavalle on Resisting (Racial) Presumption.

In his essay, “How Invisible Man Taught Me to See,” on The Wall Street Journal‘s Speakeasy blog, Victor Lavalle explores, among many things, what it means to be a black writer with a burgeoning white audience. For him, it means resistance to instinctual conclusion-jumping and, unexpectedly, fulfilling the wish of Ellison’s underground narrator to become an individual, rather than a monolith of one’s culture.

Here, he speaks about imagined responses to two sets of white friends who called his latest novel, The Big Machine, “a black book, but not a black book, you know?”:

When I was younger I would’ve felt sure I knew the answer immediately. They meant it was a book they could relate to and, by implication, most black books weren’t. They meant it was a book that didn’t scare them like all those brutish black men out in the real world. They meant the book didn’t work double-time to make them feel guilty for being white. These are some of answers I would’ve come up with when I was a younger man. And, quite frankly, it would’ve been enough to end both those friendships. I would’ve stalked off, feeling self-righteous and certain and no one could’ve told me different.

But as I say, that was ten years back. And in that time, my goodness, I have said and done the wrong thing countless times, most often without even realizing I’d been an ass. (Try telling a Bangladeshi author how much you enjoy Indian literature and you’ll see what I mean.) So when these friends spoke that dread sentence I took a moment to recall their faces: flushed red with embarrassment, their eyes making contact with the ceiling, the walls, the floors—anything but me. They were scared, bordering on terrified, by what they wanted to say. It’s a black book, but not a BLACK book.

He then decides to offer them the opportunity to elaborate, rather than to assume he already knows what they mean:

They said that Ricky Rice (the narrator for most of the book) just seemed like them. His fears, his dreams, the way he navigated the world. They were surprised to find so many of their own trials reflected in his. They wouldn’t have guessed that a 40 year old black man from Queens, a former junkie and petty criminal, who was raised in a religious cult, would seem exactly like a 33 year old white mother living in Brooklyn or a 35 year old white father who’d grown up on Long Island.

That’s sure as hell not what I’d expected them to say. In five lifetimes I would never have imagined such a thing. Their answers made me think of Ellison’s novel again. That ending. But with a different understanding this time. In 1953 Ellison’s “Invisible Man” had to assert the idea that he might be speaking for the reader—any reader, whereas now, these two friends of mine were asserting their similarity to Ricky Rice. And it was me, the author, who had to be convinced of their kinship.

In the end, Lavalle’s essay reads as more than a rumination on Invisible Man and more, of course, than an exercise in improving communication between the races. It seems an admonition against the assumption of difference. It’s about the perils of reading segregation (of experience and ideas) into cross-racial friendships. And as a bonus for writers, there’s a message here about underestimating your readership; doing so can negatively affect your writing and your discussions of content with culturally diverse audiences.

Give the whole piece a gander, when you get time. Particularly on MLK Day, this essay’s a great read.

slb

slb (aka Stacia L. Brown) is a writer, mother, and college instructor in Baltimore, MD. Check her out here: http://stacialbrown.com and here: http://beyondbabymamas.com.
  • I was just talking to my homie, Jonzey, a Black woman filmmaker
    about who her audience is.

    Who she makes her art for.

    While we can’t control who Loves our work, we know the reason
    for which we create, and for whom, to deny that is Bad Faith.

    They said that Ricky Rice (the narrator for most of the book) just seemed like them. His fears, his dreams, the way he navigated the world. They were surprised to find so many of their own trials reflected in his. They wouldn’t have guessed that a 40 year old black man from Queens, a former junkie and petty criminal, who was raised in a religious cult, would seem exactly like a 33 year old white mother living in Brooklyn or a 35 year old white father who’d grown up on Long Island.
    =======
    Is it possible that Victor’s book could be a Black book
    and appeal to White folks?
    Does it have to be an either or, or can it be a both/and?

  • Lisa

    I haven’t read the whole article yet, but I will later, but one comment on what is here. I don’t really see how their answer was all that different than what he would have “assumed” when he was a younger man and being an “ass”. How is saying, it is a black book but not a black book b/c I could relate to the character and he thinks how I think, which is suprising b/c he’s black, all that different from “this book isn’t about scary black people and doesn’t make me feel guilty for being a white person”? Too me it sounds the same. I guess it is a matter of exposure but I’m rarely “shocked” if a white character, whether male or female, thinks like me though I might be suprised or pleased with how talented the author is in really accurately catching how some of us actually think. So I still think his inital assesment was accurate but he is just more mellow and forgiving in how he responds, but these white people are no different in their soft bigotry of being surprised that black people might be like them (i.e, just human beings with the same problems, desires, intelligence, thought patterns, etc).

    • slb

      I agree that there isn’t too large a difference between what he assumed and what they explained. He does mention in the essay that he’s mellowed with age and it’s from his maturer state that he was able to pause and question before flying off the handle.

      I think his point was that the difference wasn’t in them but in him. He didn’t expect white audiences to find his protagonist relatable. He expected them to be offput, rather than finding points of comparison between themselves and the character. He expected them to be afraid *only.* They may have been, but they were also engaged/connected on a personal level. In that sense, he posits, he may have underestimated his white readership.

  • What I have always found remarkable about how many approach Ellison’s work (namely INVISIBLE MAN) is that people actually think about through Ellison–that is, they listen to what HE says about the work is. But of course, as any good critic will tell you, the author is probably the last person to consult on his work. And, Ellison, critic par excellence, would agree.

    Authorial expectation, intent, and self-criticism is fine for a minute. But, as Roland Barthes reminds us, the text only comes to life when the reader becomes final arbiter. That is to say, for a text to live, the author must die.

    I found LaVelle’s thoughts on Ellison most interesting–but when he talked about his own work and what thought white readers’ responses would be, he was essentially saying nothing. Writers–particularly those who write fiction–are most at their most boring when they talk their own work, its meanings, and its expected affect on readers.

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  • Invisman52

    Did you guys get my post on this? I think my comment was held up.